opinions welcomed!

I'm working on an old RP i have been working on for a long time, but could do with some fine tuning so i'm just gonna lay out my bio and my back story ideas. Any input would be helpful and welcome.

Character

Name:Mitch (Surname unknown)
Weapons: (To be obtained as story line develops)
Abilities: Loose control of ice magic
Fighting skill: Skilled in hand to hand, swords and occasionally if necessary guns
Age: 20

Mitch was never really happy until he met his first love, Charlotte, at the age of 20. He'd had girlfriends befor but this was different, this was love. One night she came to visit him, told him she needed to see him. She told him she would be moving away the next morning, this would be there last day together and reached out to kiss him. Mitch closed his eyes and leaned in awaiting what he thought would be true loves first kiss. Suddenly he was over come by an overwhelming painn as if something was ripping into his neck, then darkness.
When Mitch awoke he found himself lying in an open grave, unable to remember his own name. He pulled himself from the grave and found a wallet in the pocket of his jeans. inside was a picture of him and his "love" with the names Mitch and Charlotte written in a heart on the back. The name matched the one on the tombstone of his grave, and pieces of his memory began to fall in place. Mitch had been bitten, he felt his neck and found two small wounds. Mitch realised what had happend at once, he had been used by the one he loved, turned into a creature of the night. From that moment on he traveled, desperate to find and defeat the creature cruel enough to do this or at least find out why.
On his travels he met very few people but there was one man he befriended. He went by the name Edwin and was well versed in the schools of magic and agreed to teach him the to control the powers of ice. With the ice magic under his belt Mitch moved on. searching for Charlotte and the answers to his questions.

oh and i forgot to mention my two beta titles. "rebirth" and "dark awakening"

tis good.... as for titles... as i said on msn its best to use a title that goes with the general objective of that actual rp...

Just a note - Please don't double post thelaughingman, if you want to say something else please edit your post.

Thanks.

i shall keep that in mind

As for the RP. It sounds good. You should put a good opening to it and ask members to join and see how it goes ^^

Thanks for the input. il work on an opening and hopefully get it started soon ^-^

im all ears and quite fascinated by your information output on how you felt it should be represented i you ever need another person ill join in

Sounds like a fun idea! I'm interested in seeing how it would play out. If you make a good opening for it, I'd be interested in joinin' up!

I need to do some work on a start up. Bleh has suggested i break the rp down into sections so i can obtain new magics and my trademark weapon from my original rough draft story. When that is complete il put up a sign up for anyone interested in joining. I'm glad you like it and welcome you to my dark little story with open arms ^-^